“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
Some section of people believes that exploring illness and then giving treatment would be exorbitant; although, I feel that researching diseases would open the doors towards a healthy life, preventing diseases is quite significant in percolating further and it would not cost heavy.
On the one hand, there are various inexpensive measures prescribed for living a healthy life. For instance, to prevent obesity, a balanced diet along with the simple exercises helps in boosting the immune system which in turn keeps the body fit and agile. So, the government should spread awareness among its citizens about such steps. it should broadcast varied measures for all kinds of maladies to debar the proliferation.
On the other hand, these measures would be beneficial for the people who are below the poverty line. these sections of people would find it economical and can adopt it without any hindrance. For example, to eradicate polio from its land, The government of india hired some special executives who visited people and provided the dose of polio-free of cost. This step aided india to become a polio-free country.
However, funding in researches would also be fruitful for the diseases which can occur even after following the regime. To be more precise, aids. The rate of getting infected is higher and the consequences are detrimental. The research on the treatment of the aforementioned virus thus has become indispensable to avoid further expansion.
In conclusion, despite agreeing that it would be advantageous by financing researches for a better future, I think that timely measures would be more reasonable and effective to terminate further growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3320754717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81668729274 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7432669514 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18159967087 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518763013363 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595744902979 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108935815632 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629225911205 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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