It is often claimed that more fund should be provided in precautionary measures of ailments since treatment is expensive. I fully agree with this statement and think that taking preventative measures and spending money on it, before disease occurrence, is value for money.
Firstly, Vaccination, Which cost low and works magically against ailments while medicating these would cost huge amount money after its appearance. Moreover, Treating viral diseases is waste of money and time, since there is no cure but vaccination could prevent such diseases. For example, In 20th century, there was an outbreak of Plague, Billions of dollar wasted on treating people with this disease until vaccine came, which eradicated this disease and it cost very low in comparison with its treatment. That's why it is better to spend more money in prevention rather than treatment.
Secondly, By doing routine check-up of their blood pressure, Glucose level in blood and dieting with fresh foods, anyone could stay away from some very common life threatening disease condition such as Heart attack, Brain Stroke, Diabetes which are frequently occurring now-a-days and treatment of these ailments are quite expensive. Furthermore, Making a small habits of doing exercise can be beneficial in preventing diseases by refreshing one's mind which helps one from brain diseases, although it doesn't cost a penny. For instance, Most of the athletes are free from diabetes without spending any money, as they do exercise, maintain balance diet.
To conclude, I strongly believe that investing more money in preventative measures would be more logical than spending on treatment because prevention is cost effective and is the only way to eradicate diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41328413284 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69145129577 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6195307474 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23652734595 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995913527837 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630403005986 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148553514161 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542400073269 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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