Health is wealth. Some people believe that spending on health education is valuable while others opine that there are other ways to takle this problem. I am in the favour to spend money on serious matter like helath education. In my forthcoming paragraphs i will discuss my opinion with required example.
To commence with, health education is essential for everyone, beacuse there are some ailmant today wich consist no treatmemt. For illustration doctors recommend preventions first from the serious diseases like cancer, aids, flues because these are very dangerous diseases which spread in country because lack of knowledge regarding these.
Moving further, if education about health givin to children from the very bigning stage of life then they get aware about the consequences , and formulas to pervent themselve, in future this phenomena leads to disease free environment in the country . Addionally by spending some thrifts on health education department by showing some advertisement on television also provide crucial knowledge about fitness to people of rural areas .
After pondering over a great deals and delebration with myself i would like to conclude that pervention is always better than cure and this trend should be continus in future also to make world healthy.
- "Prevention is better than cure."Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. 79
- Nowadays managers and team leaders in different organizations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42288557214 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66744149643 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686567164179 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.491293645 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.111111111 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18908122197 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750105679271 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393398011711 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102395852973 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00701014624687 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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