What would you do if you were able to get the latest news of the world in your place the second you connect to the internet? would you go miles and miles to get a newspaper or to wait for the delivery guy to come? technology has made this world a better and a faster version of the past and i will elaborate on this essay why i agree that print media will completely be replaced by internet use sources.
Firstly, no one has the time to get in the morning traffic for a newspaper and at the same time would want to know the latest news. Talking about the transportation costs to get a newspaper is by far more than the costs of connecting to the internet and engage with the world. For example, I had a friend of mine that was into the world news but sadly she didn't have a car in order to get the newspapers,she would get so late if she used the public transportation and the delivery guy would come so late but her problem got solved by checking the newspapers online everyday. Nevertheless, she gets any specific information at any time of the day and these news are updated every hour which isn't provided with the print media as they have to printed and distributed.
Secondly, not everyone has the health to go and get a newspaper or a magazine. Elderly and disabled people will now feel like they are just like everyone else and they get to know everything they need without making effort. The mental health and feeling that they're part of this world besides their disability or age is something so vital. Some of these disabled people are the world geniuses and can make a difference in the world by the ideas they get from reading the newspapers. For example, Mustafa Isaak, the disabled man who discovered how papers are made and prevented trees getting cut in order to manufacture papers. He solved one of the world's biggest problems by allowing the internet to be a source for spreading news daily and minimize the effect of global warming caused by the cutting of trees.
On the other side, using the internet and the smart devices a lot can cause some health problems but they can for sure be solved by using the devices for a specific time in order to stay fit and healthy.
To sum up, I totally agree that the print media will be replaced by the internet sources. It will minimize the cutting of trees, give the disabled people the opportunity to know the world news and most importantly save a lot of time in order to make the world a better place.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- Print Media, including magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet use sources.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43201754386 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42571914719 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462719298246 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9872847365 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199176044732 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798851424938 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115160453425 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142121909737 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111803834898 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.