prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. however, a more effective solution is provide people a better education. do you agree or disagree
Some people argue that the decrease of crime rates would be achieved more effectively by better education than prison sentences. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of view owing to these two approaches have their own distinct merits.
On the one hand, the reasons why prison are of necessity for reduction of crimes are varied. They are the place for people who have broken the law and ensuring safety for other citizens. Firstly, prison sentences act as a deterrent against crimes because it helps people to be aware of serious consequences of committing crimes. For example, criminals would face losing freedom, separation from loved family members, social isolation and such people will live in a miserable life in a cell and they even might lose chance to get jobs after releasing back into society. If people who are having intention of committing crimes are aware of these things may reconsider about breaking the laws. Secondly, if serious offenders are behind bars, the no longer pose a threat to community especially serial killers, murderers and rapists. These people may tend to reoffend so if they were given the life imprisonment, law-abiding inhabitants could be protected.
On the other hand, I am the opinion that educational methods also have a complementary role to play in reducing incidence of crime. Firstly, developed education heightens people’s intellect and forming a civilized society. Besides, if students were taught basic knowledge of law so that they would be well-formed about the damage of committing crimes cause to their community and they could avoid situations which may involve in crimes or making them become a victim. For example, there are many cases where drug traffickers take advantage of people’s lack of knowledge to help carrying bags which contain cocaine. Secondly, it is also necessary to have educational programs in prison such as vocational training so that offenders could gain more experiences and skills which allow them get jobs after releasing back into the community.
In conclusion, I believe that there is no absolute way to evaluate whether imprisonment or better education take the dominant role in addressing with crimes as they both have a significant role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jobs after releasing back into society. If people who are having intention of comm...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to carry' or 'carry'.
Suggestion: to carry; carry
...e of people’s lack of knowledge to help carrying bags which contain cocaine. Secondly, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20498614958 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7492903842 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2323490282 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.266666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176730472636 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649498863557 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564154476331 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123593524146 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393753789832 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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