The problem with society today is that it is essentially unbalanced, with some people being paid huge salaries to work very long hours, whilst others do not have a job and have too much time on their hands. There is no middle ground. Do you agree or disagree?
Presently, unemployment occurs as a concerning issue in numerous countries. Simultaneously, people have to work immensely industrious in order to achieve a decent livelihood. It is true that this is a severe problem these days.
To commence, it is generally agreed that many individuals spend ample time working to be paid a handsome salary. First of all, there is an increasing number of enterprises that pay their employees insufficient remuneration, and hence they have a tendency to work overtime to be paid more. For instance, my sibling who is currently working at a small business has to work additional hours daily on account of her inadequate salary. In addition, by virtue of high living expenses as well as inflation, people might desire a steady job with high salaries. As a result, they are compelled to show great performance constantly, which leads to extra working hours.
Regardless, many individuals believe that there are still several people who are unemployed. To begin with, according to recent research, nearly 15% of the population of the United States suffered from unemployment in 2020. Furthermore, one possible reason for this alert issue is perhaps the lack of quality education. Supposing that more people were well educated, the rate of unemployment might witness a decline as well.
In conclusion, there are a number of strong arguments to support the idea that inequality is a worrying issue in our society nowadays. While some individuals are required to work overtime, others might experience unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, so, still, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28861788618 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06359813805 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638211382114 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2464021858 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189906544702 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539006135322 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418048096063 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970593120867 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503024748937 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.