Professional athletes in popular sports like football (soccer) and basketball are overpaid. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is a normal conception that popular game players' earnings are too high to commensurate with their work. Though they get their hard work paid after winning titles for their nations, but their salaries are unjustifiable when compared with other people working dawn to dusk round the year for their countries.
Popular sports, in a country, are often sponsored by reputed multinational brands. From team shirts to investiture ceremonies are financed by many industries bringing a huge revenue. For premier leagues, franchises put a lot of money while quoting players. In international tournaments we see even more investments. The reason for such huge investments by industries is due to humongous viewership winning them publicity. Then famous players are hired as brand ambassadors and acting in advertisements of these brands as well. All this makes them to earn a lot of money. But the main reason of all this fame and earnings is people's viewership. Furthermore, players are often heavily rewarded by governments for winning title for their nations. Though its our attitude towards them which make them so popular and rich, but their earnings are quite unjustified when compared with our educated people like scientists, doctors and engineers. Governments support all foreign tours of teams with reserve players but its very hard nut to crack for one scientist to get funding for presenting his research at an international conference. Players, making much more money, adopt sumptuous lifestyle and get idealized by youth. A lot of high school students focus more on sports than the studies and end up in ruining their careers.
To conclude, sportsmen just get reward of their hard work in the field but bestowing them with extra-ordinary rewards discourages people serving their country in other fields of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 752, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...winning title for their nations. Though its our attitude towards them which make th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27491408935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85452646636 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2848861214 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289224851617 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108801249219 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190799925763 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0161123255824 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132726073859 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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