By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by Ml980510 on Fri, 06/15/2018 - 08:12

Whether or not that life imprisonment is claimed as a better means of punishment for murderers in society, in respect of the fact that society becomes guilty of committing murder by punishing those with death penalty. I am convinced that life in prison is a much better punishment.

Life in prison, by all means, has a good purpose to murderers. When criminals commit an offense in killing, facing the retribution of their own acts by incarceration reasonable. Albeit, there are still countries with death penalty, such as, India, US, Saudi Arabia. Compared with death penalty, criminals who are given the right to have rehabilitation during their life in prison, have the opportunity in life renewal. It is very unreasonable to have capital punishment which is a really thorny measure.

Another point is that death penalty slide too easily to revenge. An example of this is offenders’ family members who are filled with anger to the innocent, as a result, consequences often lead to take revenge. Disappointments in people who are innocent of guilty, in fact, is never considered as forgivable in their heart, but only resentment grow stronger and stronger. ‘An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth’, The retribution which is regarded as innocent, once again, can never make people contented, but only injustice and hatred, rooted deeply in their hearts.

Undeniably, other individuals may say that, death penalty is a deterrent execution to those with felony. Albeit, it is suspected that there is no need to have death sentences which is a harsh penalty. Culprits, are adjudicated and in the end, should suffer proper penalty which could be homicide.

To recapitulate, I profess that incarceration is an advantageous punishment which may decrease the criminals if capital punishment not be taken into account.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
It has become debatable whether or not that life imprisonment is claimed as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, as for, in fact, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25367647059 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13626645542 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8764721945 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282268267325 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851269427369 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100033391817 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158280649654 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135175197996 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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