It is stated that society is also guilty for committing murder by punishing criminals with the capital punishment therefore it is better to punish murderers in a prison . I hold partial views for this due to following reasons.
To commence with, no one has the right to give capital punishment to murderers. This is because, god creates all creatures of the world. Due to which, they have the right to give these type of punishments to criminals. As a consequence, committing the murderers with death penalty is wrong thing. Moreover, murderers life in prison is better punishment instead of death penalty, because all humans is a statue of mistakes. Owing to which, giving them a second chance is good for themselves to realise their mistake.Thereby, it turns into a good citizens
However, death penalty is crucial for some murderers. This is due to the fact that, they are awful and repeat it more than once. Due to this, living them in the society is deleterious for individuals.As a result, government can set an example for others when they give death penalty to these type of criminals. Apart from this, when more than two murderers are in jail then they can learn new tactics . The reason is that, they both have clever brain. Owing to this, they can try to give more harm to public. So for this reason, punishing criminals with capital punishment is better.
Eventually, i would like to conclude that both type of punishments are essential but firstly government should find actual reason behind it then they should give death penalty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90114068441 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69542285714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6030465014 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395496738312 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137570270129 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130412559659 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267333878088 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128023192534 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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