People hold opposing views on how we deal with harsh reality. While some people think that we should accept and feel satisfied with what life brings to us, I am convinced that trying to improve them is a better way to face such situations.
On the one hand, that accepting such difficult circumstances is beneficial in some cases. First, some people easily accept to live with these unsatisfying situations to give their priority to other important purposes. A typical example that can be seen is housewives, who are willing to give up their favorite jobs to have more time to raise their children and family. Moreover, sometimes, we are afraid to change because of our uncertain future. Some people agree to do the jobs they do not want in order to pay for their basic needs. This is because they do not have enough ability to find a better job that they like.
On the other hand, I am on the same side with those who do not give up and keep trying to overcome bad situations. First, people trying to improve such dilemmas are often be highly appreciated. In today's work environment, employers will often have special interests in employees knowing how to handle or improve difficult problems. Therefore, they will easily get promoted in the future. Secondly, solving difficult situations can help to improve our education as well as learn from experience for the next time. This is because we can gain more useful knowledge, widen our horizons and remember to solve similar situations for the next time.
In conclusion, whether we should accept the hard conditions or keep working is a topic of debate. However, I still subscribe to the view that we should try our best to solve such difficulties as much as we can.
- Q Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Q Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80267558528 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57472087671 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.365527089 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26098099146 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825106216862 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613956499582 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155267128551 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298751675954 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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