The quality and skills that person become required to successful in today world cannot be learnt other universities and any other academic institution to what extent do you agree or not?
In this era, this is essential issue with that the present education system not equip enough knowladge which do not aid students to gain acquire skills and qualities. We all know that skills and quality is entail to become successful. Today, I would manifest this essay briefly.
On the one hand. The current education system is not helps to much become a successful person. The grades, mark we can not be measure with intelligence and skills. Nowadays,, More and more universities and schools have been increase computer science and soft skills who major influence the students. This changes make educational system failure. For example Albert Einstein and another scientists had successful personalities. They had dropped them school and still they achieve a lot in their lives.
On the other hand, sometimes good education make a successful person. School and universities devote us certificate and degree not help to become successful merely they provide job and wages to everyone which helps to less struggle to get job. However, to a begin a business we should look to future which has not teach anywhere in the education system. I believe that we should change our education system because we have outdated syllabus which not use in future. We have technologies and language which use in industries and engineering.
To recupilate, if we should equip important things in our educational system it become useful in future despite good education is not make success without struggle and experience. However, education is good things who devote us acquire knowledge and learn our plenty of various tradition, language and other more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entailed'.
Suggestion: entailed
... We all know that skills and quality is entail to become successful. Today, I would ...
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Suggestion:
...ail to become successful. Today, I would manifest this essay briefly. On the...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...e current education system is not helps to much become a successful person. The gr...
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Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...e with intelligence and skills. Nowadays,, More and more universities and schools ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o less struggle to get job. However, to a begin a business we should look to future whi...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
... we should look to future which has not teach anywhere in the education system. I bel...
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Line 9, column 456, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...we have outdated syllabus which not use in future. We have technologies and language whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ant things in our educational system it become useful in future despite good education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, look, so, still, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23773584906 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7247007733 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3868195097 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6470588235 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13317647655 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471808632706 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497410720073 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849329810782 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157228876493 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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