The quality of healthcare a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that any individual should receive the same quality of healthcare regardless of their financial conditions, and the government ought to ensure this. I concur with this view, and in what follows, it will be argued why universal health care is advantageous for the economy of a country and more ethically correct.
Universal health care lowers healthcare costs for an economy. By providing people with preventive care, the number of access in hospital lower too. For instance, in the USA, in the last year 46% of people who can not afford some medications or screening end up using the emergency room because this is the only way they have to access the health service. This has largely increased the cost of the health system, and this increase could have been avoided if universal care of preventive medicine were provided. Hence, countries with no universal care programs may end up pay more for their health care systems.
In addition, from an ethical point of view, nobody should die because they cannot afford access to medical care. Denying care to a person in need can lead to an increase in crime and dehumanisation. Sadly, in the United States who cannot afford health insurance will not be given healthcare. A recent article reported that a 24-year-old American boy died because he and his family did not have enough money to buy insulin, which is costly and practically unaffordable unless health insurance is held. This person could have probably positively contributed to society, but he could not.
In conclusion, universal health care help lower the cost of a country economy and help people who are vulnerable to survive and probably contribute to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03558718861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66648038677 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1764909862 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105859165177 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465654583415 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555084118463 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705491009197 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655195147981 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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