In some cultures, old people are valued more, while in other cultures youth is considered more valuable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some cultures attach more importance to the elderly, other cultures attribute more worth to young people. In this essay, I will argue that the former focus on the elderly's wisdom and experience, whereas the latter concentrate on the physical strength and mental efficiency of the youth. From my point of view, although both views are reasonable, I believe that elderly people merit more credit than youth due to their wisdom.
The elderly constitute a worthy source of empirical knowledge. Their knowledge can be shared, thereby young people can acquire invaluable and unique information. For instance, a 20-year-old musician who questioned a 50-year-old musician is likely to obtain unique and reliable pieces of information because the latter has had more chances to make mistakes and learn from them. Hence, this information can help speed up the learning of the young person because it can prevent and predict possible pitfall while they learn, and so, help them succeed in their career.
On the other hand, young people are generally more receptive to learn new knowledge and physically stronger. Normally, the older a person the weaker their memory and their muscles. For example, militarised countries often use youngsters as a symbol of health and wealth of the country. As well as the job market requires mostly young people because of their ability to tolerate stress, and to acquire and retain information quickly and better than the elderly.
In conclusion, youngsters are more likely to be appreciated for their physical and mental freshness, but the elderly usually carry more wisdom. Personally, I would give greater importance to the elderly because of their rule of guide for new generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69143115329 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2143000747 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210098813971 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079061041304 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913396118771 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132805458693 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941170221461 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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