The line graph shows the number of people who moved from four European countries to the United States of America.
The chart gives information regarding how many people migrated from four European countries to the USA, from 1867 to 1907.
Overall, in 1867 Irish emigrants were the majority, followed by Norwegian and Spanish, while Greek people were the minority. Furthermore, by 1907, Irish and Norwegian immigration fell, while Spanish and Greek immigration rose.
In 1867, Norway and Ireland accounted for four and eleven emigrants out of a hundred thousand of people respectively. By 1907, both Norwegian and Irish emigration decreased. However, the former decreased steadily from eleven emigrants out of a hundred people to just above eight, while the latter rose sharply in 1867 reaching a peak of 10 emigrants by 1877. However, by 1887 The number of Norwegian immigrants plunged to 6.5. Subsequently, this number declined again, but slightly and steadily to 5.5 in 1907.
Differently, Spain and Greek immigration increased quite dramatically over the period. In particular, Greek emigration had a fivefold increase, and the number of Spanish emigrants approximately doubled. Namely Greek immigrants rose from one emigrant in a hundred thousand people to just below six, and Spanish emigrants from four immigrants to eight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Namely,
...panish emigrants approximately doubled. Namely Greek immigrants rose from one emigrant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89077871194 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0317498815 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143874260995 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646311410457 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693040664546 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11212848611 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078693725451 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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