Question : It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents , for instance for sports or music, and others are not . However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a commonly accepted view that some people have innate ability in things such as sports or music and others do not, but are at times argued to learn skills as children. I believe that in as much as this skills can be learnt, some are gifts and those ones are swifter to display. This essay will dilate both views.
To begin with, it is common knowledge that skills are inborn. This is as a result of the fact that most people who are vast in certain area, show early signs of it from childhood. They begin to show some form of attachments to the particular skill with extraordinary zeal and passion. In fact, i think that even though these skills are said to be cognitive, they are within and what is called learning is only sharpening already exististent ability. For instance, the members of Jackson 5 group, are all born musicians, such that each could do music separately and still remain outstanding. More so, it is easier to demonstrate and succeed with abilities that come through nativity than the learnt ones. Christiane Ronaldo dribbles with ease and scores with unmatched and unthinkable ease and speed because he is a born footballer. this reason, it is safe to say talented people are born with whatever talent they have.
On the other hand, some persons think that any juvenile can become prolific in sporting and musical capabilities by being tutored because, at such tender age, they have sharp brains and are amenable to new things. Children can go to school or academy to acquire knowledge of virtually anything, also their parents can begin to shape their passion at their early age. To illustrate this, the legendary Nigeria musician, Tu Face, developed the singing ability of his first son to take after him, though he is yet to feature in any album. To this ends, talents can be impacted by a teacher.
To conclude, while it is possible for people to be trained in a particular skill, many persons are born with the them, and it is my opinion that the ease of practicality is more with innately derived prowess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72701949861 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46943120709 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57938718663 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9555182856 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273169154704 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802208375646 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052452786581 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161676221717 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00779423001303 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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