Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that the government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
Do you agree or disagree?
Air traffic is causing increased environmental hazard and erection of new airports structures, This is as a result of affordable commuters flight tickets to international tourism centers. Few individuals mentioned that heavy taxation should be placed on commuters, however, I am of the opinion that, air ticket should be made expensive in order to relief environmental hazard and to discourage commuters from flying airplanes.
To begin, generally, it is indisputable that air traffic pose threats to the environment. The fumes release from the engine of aircraft contains high quantity of carbon dioxide, carbon mono-oxide and formaldehyde. The above mentioned chemical compounds causes breakdown of the Ozone layer thus leading to green house effects, this also have detrimental effects on the overall ecosystem. For example, increased carbon dioxide in the air causes air pollution thus endangering human lives. It is interesting to note that incurring heavy taxation on air ticket will slim the tide of flying more planes at a time thereby relieving its havoc on the environment.
Furthermore, heavy taxation discourages passengers from flying planes. In some countries, most citizens are average income earners while others have many family responsibilities. Admittedly, these average citizens enjoy recreation and relaxation, While majority would choose non exorbitant tourists centres, a growing number would rather go against all odds to travel to high class countries such as Dubai, Canada and the United State of America. For instance, few months ago, a relative who is a civil servant sent his entire family to Dubai for relaxation. This was only possible because of affordable flight fare, however, if air traffic was heavily levied, their chances of travelling would have been very slim.
In conclusion, To relief the danger pose by air traffic on the environment, airlines must be greatly taxed must be heavily taxed in order to discourage a greater number from flying airplanes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50324675325 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94462262639 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1002440435 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.384615385 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21742160318 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770245163391 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619678483354 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128451115385 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309733818207 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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