Nowadays we communicate less with our family members To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples.
Family ties are often strengthened by communication. Although it is a vital part of maintaining relationships, in this dispensation, there is reduced communication within bloodlines. I align my thought completely with this assertion as being true considering the effect of recent technology on members of a household and the resultant fast pace of life.
There are plethora of reasons to think siblings no longer spend interactive time together, one of the most prominent is probably the influence of technology such as social network media. Every member of the family this days is busy conversing on social network media such as WhatsApp, Twitter or Facebook or even surfing the internet and to the extent that they forget their immediate environment, thus ignoring their own blood relations. To illustrate, in a 2019 survey by the Society for Family Health in Nigeria, there is a reported case of discord in family ties because siblings no longer keep effective and frequent communication.
More so, we live in a fast-paced world and this makes people to focus so much on meeting the rising needs of the time. In fact, the work schedule of many makes it unsuitable to make out time for family, thus obstructing the good time they would have had together to converse and know each other better. This is exemplified by a research done by students of the Department of Sociology, University of Abuja, in which many respondents confessed to getting too engrossed with work life and abandoning their homes. Surprisingly, some even end up not returning to the house because of too many commitments.
To conclude, despite the importance of communication in the family, turn of events currently gives rise to decline in interaction between family members and I agree to this as a result of technological advancement and its effect as well as the busy schedule maintained by most persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sidering the effect of recent technology on members of a household and the result...
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Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...twork media. Every member of the family this days is busy conversing on social netwo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, well, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03412605468 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3792496209 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.181818182 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175135087186 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577065498941 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366951257639 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102826026066 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276104058581 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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