A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the director.
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum
Describe some skill and qualities you have that would be useful.
Give details of when you will be available for work.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in relation to your newspaper advertisement calling for interested volunteers in your museum and to hereby apply for the position.
My interest in rendering voluntary services span from my encounter with less privilege members of the society during my undergraduate in 2019. Although, I could not do much at that time because of my routine academic engagement, it strengthened my zeal and resolve to take up the role.
I am a legal practitioner and by virtue of my profession, I possess hands-on experience in social justice. Even though the world is drifting in a negative direction, I still possess a people-oriented mindset. Thus I think it stands me out in the race for the position.
I have just finished my contract with a charity organisation in Bornu state and i am returning to Abuja in two weeks time. Thus, I will be on ground to resume officially on the first working day in December.
I look forward to an opportunity to meet and establish a working relationship with you.
Yours faithfully,
Francis Ojima Akoji
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in relation to your newspap...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...till possess a people-oriented mindset. Thus I think it stands me out in the race fo...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...charity organisation in Bornu state and i am returning to Abuja in two weeks time...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ablish a working relationship with you. Yours faithfully, Francis Ojima Akoji ...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ionship with you. Yours faithfully, Francis Ojima Akoji
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, then, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00558659218 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1459012794 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9357550349 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169671022073 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054625765044 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484630031574 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087606661394 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497234060661 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.