Question: Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charges. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
The issue of copyrights in the music industry and literature has been on debate recently. The violation of copyrights has been dominant across the globe. Despite several conveniences that the free downloading of music and books bring about, I would contend that it could have detrimental efforts on the music sector and literature in general and on artists and writers in particular.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, free-of-charge downloading ensures also unlimited access to a range of sources of music pieces/songs and books. This feature enables internet users to download thousands, convenient for their entertainment and study. While this could save the budget of the audience much, it does great harm to the financial stability of singers, composers, musicians and writers. Once their copyrights are not respected, their income would reduce dramatically.
Though the free access to music and literature works on the web could make them gain more popularity among the public, this could pose a threat of plagiarism. Some novel songs in Vietnamese have shown evidence of plagiarized sound beats from the top-hit international ones. This, in the long run, could deteriorate the creativity among young artists. In addition, the audience would feel more bored and lose their interest in enjoying new music but cling to famous masterpieces of the 60s, 70s or 80s. As a result, the profileration of music and literature masterpieces would be unfeasible.
In conclusion, the free downloading of music and books on the internet has provided the most diverse sources of leisure and research ever. However, I am think that the governors should impose more stringent censorship on the act of downloading by the public to benefit the music and literature industries.
- Question Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charges To what extent is this a positive or a negative development 79
- Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charges To what extent is this a positive or a negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...eisure and research ever. However, I am think that the governors should impose more s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97414162887 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5639337816 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188981831778 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637921238601 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430982706842 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115857171063 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306075184146 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.