Question:
The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel.
To what consequences may overpopulation lead?
In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
Rising our planet’s population is the biggest problem for humans. As per the stated notion, our planet’s increasing population causes so many problems like in many parts of the world, people are facing shortage of water, food and fuel. In our coming future, population is the biggest problem i can say. according to me, there are so many steps can be taken by the people and the government as well. this essay will throw the light on the above concerned matter and will discuss everything before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with,earth’s population is rapidly increasing day by day, there are multiple reasons due to which this happen. The biggest reason is the lack of education. according to a survey by UNESCO , the population of the countries increasing dramatically, where a huge number of people are uneducated. For instance, India is the perfect example. In some rural parts of Bihar and Uttar Pradesh, almost every couple have minimum 4 children. Moreover,the second reason of overpopulation is religious beliefs. some religion promote a male to marry with two or three girls because of this population is increasing. so, the growing population is the reason of lack of food, water and fuels.Therefore, the aforemention information validates my point that growing population is the reason for the lack of resources.
Furthermore, this is the huge problem for our future as well. As the resources are limited on our planet, so according to some people this can be the root reason for world war 3. In an addition, in the future many people can migrate from one country to other because of the limitation of resources. so, these are the problems which can be happen in the future.
In my opinion, it is the duty of both citizens and the government to fight against this problem but the role of the government is much more crucial than the citizens. according to me, the government should make some strict rules against it. To illustrate, In china there is a strict rule by the government. according to this rule, couples in china can give birth to only 2 children because of this rule china’s population is stable now. Thereby, it clearly state my point that how can the government make strict rules for the problem of overpopulation.
In brief, the main reason for overpopulation is illittacy and due to it many major problems can be happen like the wars. In my opinion, the government should take some strict actions against it.
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but, furthermore, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in brief, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95443645084 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91333344003 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462829736211 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6706794468 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167228256407 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497778482135 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494243461169 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102425227814 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413643955564 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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