Radio is becoming out-of-date and not necessary and not neccessary anymore. Do you agree or disagree ?
Hardly can anyone deny the increasing unpopularity or radio in recent years.There is a school of thought that radio is out dated and no longer necessary.In my opinion, although radio is out moded, it is still necessary.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of reasons why the aforementioned device is out moded, one of which is that using radio is boring. In other words, while people only listen to information by radio, they can not only watch images but also hear sounds on other means.Therefore, people have a tendency to change to other devices in lieu of radio.For example, while people who use radio solely listen to singer's voice, TV has both images and voice of singers. In addition, there are many state-of-the-art devices which appear. to be more specific, Teachnology is becoming more and more developed. This can lead to the fact that people prefer to use modern devices rather than radio.
On the other hand, I am convinced that radio is still necessary.First, radio is still convenient for the old. to be more specific, old people do not get used to suing modern devices. This may result in the fact that radio is suitable for oldsters. besides, people who drive vehicles still need radio. In other words, they can both focus on driving and listen to news.This can lead to the fact that radio suits them. For instance, may drivers of Viet nam nowadays often listen to VOV-Giao Thong on radio to update traffic congestion-related news.
In conclusion, although radio is unfashioned, this device is still necessary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88167938931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82298549945 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4664114373 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174214179907 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649676436809 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427589563883 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124735114168 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329828291566 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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