A rapidly increasing global population will lead to many social and environmental problems unless something is done to address this impending catastrophe. Suggest ways to help slow down this trend.
It is true that the morbidity rate has risen significantly both developed and developing countries and creates numerous issues like poverty. Although overpopulation creates many environmental and social issues in society, it can be tackled in more effective ways.
The first and foremost reason for the higher population is the lack of education among people in the community so the government and health authority have an important role to control the growing population. For example, they can organise effective awareness programmes right from the school and other institutions with showing documentries, short films, pictures and so on. Also, can provide awareness procession across the town and village where many people may pay greater attention on it. As a result, it would be protected from the society from excessive population otherwise it will adversely affect both family and eco-system.
Another important remedy is conducting special training for married people regarding usage of contraceptive methods. Today, the majority of people are well educated so it certainly easy to understand, whereas in the past the education was limited. Moreover, the authority can convey messages related to consequences of growing population through social media such as Youtube, Facebook and so on. Consequently, these methods certainly can reduce the number child birth every years globally.
To sum up, the overpoulation always leads many problems in society and surrounding. Therefore, if the authority take a crucial role of giving proper education and awareness programmes for everyone, it can definitely reduce the population rate in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, such as, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62903225806 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99060921826 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1095131283 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780097865178 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307148702572 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356655216715 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515101740505 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215135611062 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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