It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated day by day in all over the world mostly in youngsters and it is a worrying trend. Furthermore, government should start some campaign, attention should be given by parents and so on.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, television and smartphone are the responsibile for this cause because children like watching action movies and try to use these things in their life. Secondly, parents are bussy in their own work and they do not take care of their children that is why they prefer to adapt bad habbit or fall in the bad communities. For example, I have my one best friend he used to watch lots of movies and these days he has addicted to that and nowadays he is committing crime.
Another reason could be, unemployment rate is being increased steadily teenagers do not have much job for doing and that is why they prefer to take some heinous steps like kidnapping, murder, robbery in banks and homes and so on.
Looking on the solutions, a numbers of camping should be started by government in which they provide good moral lessons to children in funny ways. In addition, government should also pass some draconian rule against these type of channels which provide wrong content and endeavour to provide new job opportunities for people. Moreover, parents' must give some time to their children and go out for picnic with them so children feel far better as compare to anything.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly crime is increasing we know very well and it is not good for our societies or for country as well yet, we must understand that parents also play a vital role in children life they should always support their children in everything and government should provide some laws against these type of thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...c with them so children feel far better as compare to anything. On a concluding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7898089172 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55922584039 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7231841016 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967306455193 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389021297626 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266714268647 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567353461707 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196084392593 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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