From the recent worldwide survey, the information reveals that about 20% of the children, that are around only twelve years ole more likely to addict with the nicotine as well as this ratio peaks at 70% in the age of eighteen to twenty years. Many people believe that there is a major contribution of uncut television advertisement. Actually it is eagerly true that children and teenagers keen to follow advertisements that are shown in television. So it has major role to direct youngsters in the addiction of nicotine.
Children and youngsters love to watch televisions in there idle time. They are immature so they learn bad things more easily. They are not able to see the difference between good and bad things. They easily catch up it. It impacts bad on his or her behaviour. So I eagerly say that advertisements like nicotine or smoking should be banned from television broadcasting. Parent also has to control that their children cat enjoy their show without getting all this annoying things. It may be a good weapon and it also influence on children's mind. So parents have to cut up inappropriate channels from their packages.
The another aspects are also there, like if a child has a bad companion which has habits like nicotine chewing or smoking or drinking alcohol, so that is also main aspect that. Child willing to develop that habits because of his friend. A child that is born with silver spoon in his mouth, and that child's parents not able to give more attention to the child may also another aspect to getting addiction of this attributes. For instance my neighbour is also richi rich and his child getting touch with bad companion got this all bad habits and now he is in the rehab center to rehabilitation.
In the conclusion parents has to give attention to the child, and to give their children advise to do not all those things that inculcate bad on their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...difference between good and bad things. They easily catch up it. It impacts bad on h...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...gs. It may be a good weapon and it also influence on childrens mind. So parents have to c...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... another aspect to getting addiction of this attributes. For instance my neighbour i...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...hild, and to give their children advise to do not all those things that inculcate bad...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77203647416 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65205885553 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516717325228 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6563092818 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083255262567 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023480649425 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535265510946 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538293108094 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601056732674 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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