In recent times, as standards of living continue to rise, more people have been able to afford their own cars. Growing car ownership has resulted in an increase in traffic congestion. It is my belief that the solution to reducing congestion are the responsibility of both individuals and governments. This essay will outline possible solutions to the problem of traffic congestion and evaluate their potential effectiveness.
To begin with, the main approach to reduce the stream of cars in the streets is improving the public transport system. At first, it should be inexpensive and allow people to use it instead of their cars. Secondly, government should provide comfortable conditions, for example, the air condition throughout the hot season and heater while cold; establish strong graphic of public transport, so people can wait not long and to build covered bus stops. Briefly, the government should do everything to do public transport as comfortable as available for all city dwellers. Nonetheless, it will have high price and it can not be integrated in short period of time but the result will cover all efforts.
Moreover, developing of railway transport such as subway. The underground system is the both cheap and fast way to move around the city. In most part it has no negative sides but the process of building and the price. Even so, not every city can admit such kind of transport due to differences in soil.
Nevertheless, the effort of only government is not enough to solve such problem. Individual car owners should be conscious of the fact that they have influence on congestions. Numerous traffic jams arise because of traffic violations. Another reason is using automobiles to move in short distances while it is unnecessarily and ignoring of other kinds of transport.
To sum up, there is no particular way to solve the problem and many steps should be done to allow these efforts to be effective.
In recent times, as standards of living continue to rise, more people have been able to afford their own cars. Growing car ownership has resulted in an increase in traffic congestion. it is my belief that the solution to reducing congestion are the responsibility of both individuals and governments. This essay will outline possible solutions to the problem of traffic congestion and evaluate their potential effectiveness.
To begin with, the main approach to reduce the stream of cars in the streets is improving the public transport system. At first, it should be inexpensive and allow people to use it instead of their cars. Secondly, government should provide comfortable conditions, for example, the air condition throughout the hot season and heater while cold; establish strong graphic of public transport, so people can wait not long and to build covered bus stops. Briefly, the government should do everything to do public transport as comfortable as available for all city dwellers. Nonetheless, it will have high price and it can not be integrated in short period of time but the result will cover all efforts.
Moreover, developing of railway transport such as subway. The underground system is the both cheap and fast way to move around the city. In most part it has no negative sides but the process of building and the price. Even so, not every city can admit such kind of transport due to differences in soil.
Nevertheless, the effort of only government is not enough to solve such problem. individual car owners should be conscious of the fact that they have influence on congestions. Numerous traffic jams arise because of traffic violations. Another reason is using automobiles to move in short distances while it is unnecessarily and ignoring of other kinds of transport.
To sum up, there is no particular way to solve the problem and many steps should be done to allow these efforts to be effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Line 2, column 644, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e and it can not be integrated in short period of time but the result will cover all efforts. ...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individual
...nt is not enough to solve such problem. individual car owners should be conscious of the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, even so, for example, in short, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05956112853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85975556039 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2752354533 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297043593475 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917791831936 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155601168938 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171633370108 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.276508367846 0.056905535591 486% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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