Recycling is now an essential measure:it is time for everyone in society to become more responsible toward the environment .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Being green is now fashionable especially among the developed countries ,and waste recycling is one of the most important aspects of this trend. Some maintain that, it is responsibility of body governments and individuals .in my opinion disposal recycling is vital for the environment to be healthier. However further research for it is benefits and drawbacks should be done .
The idea of wastes recycling is said to be intended to solve the problem of dramatic increasing in the amounts of domestic waste which is became apparent since the beginning of the last century . The main cause of this problem is believed to be the industrial revolution . Which resulted in massive amount of new products made available to even the most humbled people in cheap prices. Another reason for the increased production of wastes is claimed to be the new trend of single -use items. For instance, dishes, cups and food containers which widely Used In many fast food outlets. Even some type of fabrics are made disposable. Especially the ones used in medical facilities. Such as curtains and bed sheets which are discarded after single use . All these contribute to production of great amount of waste products.
Reprocessing and reusing of wastes would have several benefits. First of all, it would significantly lessen the amounts of rubbish in the landfill and indeed improve the environmental health . And so the problems related environment like pollution by its all types could significantly be reduced . Secondly the products made from recycled materials can be more cost effective ,as it produced from no-price raw materials.
However, using of recycled materials in certain industries generally believed to has its potential hazards. For example , the resulting health problems when those products used by mistake in handling food.
At conclusion, waste recycling appear to be effective mean to keep the environment clean and healthy . Nevertheless, further research considering its potential hazards should be done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, even so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34384858044 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91430911764 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2663411444 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104507241069 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318226477641 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304416695039 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688822586293 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308237587548 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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