Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
It is widely argued that gifted people based on the characteristics they are born without any experiences they acquire from their life. Do you think about this? Personally, I strongly believe that the empirical learning from life occupied the major influence to human.
In the one hand, I assume that the characteristics following them when they were newborn is merely additional factors. As far as I know, the human characteristics depend on two primary reasons. First of all, according to the newest analysis, newborns are always inherited character from parents. Hence, each of people has an extraordinary character that belongs them. Another reason is that the way of parents teaching. Countless people agree that children need to pay attention from their parents. For instance, if parents trained them rigorously, children would have good behavior. In contract, children would be run wild if parents over pumper, even they have anti social behaviors.
In the other hand, any experiences would effect on them directly. Characteristics is coming naturally, but not only many people have empirical that build their personality and development. Actually, in formative year, children always stand a chance to communicate with life experiences that is not taught from theory. In particular, they practice about soft skills due to communication with other people. For instance, John Rosin - an introvert person, but when he attends university, he has skills for teamwork. This makes him sociable, even often participates in event in order build a relationship.
In conclusion, in my opinion, people should create a chance by themselves in order to renew characteristics
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43076923077 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04968327974 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5524751862 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156800494524 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448695547095 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399945944088 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936418849564 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579767324105 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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