Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
in today's modern world, numerous research has been shown that people 's identity and development are more influence then others.characteristic one we born with or from our ancestors represent ourself. I believe experience is more influential than the other.this essay will define both views.
However, if the person travelling to abroad or immigrate to another country they need to be aware of their culture and language.we would more mature and open-minded.wehenever anyone arrive at the new place they can learn the different culture and things that makes them more knowledgeable. besides, we may learn how to respect and not to criticises others.so we can actually get benefited by being able to look at the problems from various perspective.
we may also become more self-responsible and manage our problems and take wise decisions.to illustrate, in china children has to work from a very early age when they have to go to school they have to take care of their own self because of poverty. moreover, people who face so many hardships and challenges in their life they know what to do next.they can prevent problems before they arrive because of experience. so they can manage their expenditure well. therefore, experience in life makes people more responsible and it affects people's personality also.
in conclusion, I am of the experience that life experience has a major consequence on our personalities and development that we are born with.we will able to think from a different perspective and make a wise decision from experience we gained in daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17254901961 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21758910703 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9469270076 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.555555556 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338814774765 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129740484076 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104364403497 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215229818827 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091046941791 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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