Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
A person’s personality assists to indicate someone’s features and quality. It can be inherent or sometime it can be influence by surrounding environments. It is debatable issue that, some people claim that, someone character is more dominate by inborn quality, while some argue that experience also influence our behavior. I partially agree on the statement and the essay will examine the arguments on both favor and against of the topic.
To begin with, a person’s growth, development and characteristic was more influenced by inherent traits. A baby adopts the quality of their parents when they are in mother womb. For example, if a parent has specific nature like aggressive, shyness, blood group or common diseases, then the chances of adopting similar character by baby was more. A research had revealed that, more than 50% of attribute of parents can be transfer to their baby. The best example of influence of genes is twins. It had been proofed that identical twins share more than 50% of quality, whereas fraternal twins share only 15%.
On the other hand, we cannot ignore the phrase like, we are product of environment. Similarly, the environment where we grow up, friend circle, neighbors also affect our behavior. For example, children of sports person can choose other profession. Moreover, In India, Punjabi people are considered as a champion on sports due to their daily food and hard work at agriculture, whereas, south Indian as intelligent, due to their strict guidance in childhood. This has no relation on heredity.
In conclusion, people some traits are dominate by inherent trait, whereas environment also have same level of influenced on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dominated'.
Suggestion: dominated
... In conclusion, people some traits are dominate by inherent trait, whereas environment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23247232472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82637075028 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7171230487 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254546710529 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707626035659 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583013389887 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127521643912 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290685552277 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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