Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Nowadays, researcers indicate how we can improve ous characteristics.There is ine report from the researchers,itshown that the personality and development of a person depend on characteristics which come from birth.However I believe that experiences of a person have greater influence on people's personality and development.It improves our life properties and mental outlook.
My first argument is about improving mental outlook, which is depend on life experiences.For example, if we arrive somewhere new,we can learn cultres and traditions from local people.It improves our experience and mental outlook about traditions of the world.Thus this mental outlook allow us to make good relationships with people.In conclusion of this we don't get any problems when communicate with others.
My other argument is about taking good properties.If people have experiences, it is expected that they can achieve these aims.For example, in India children are involved to work in early ages.Of course, these jobs don't include mental abilities,these are phisically ones.On the other hand, people eho face a lot of hardships in their life time, it is expected that they have detailed plans about what to do next in the future.Therefore, gaining experiences from different jobs have a great impact in their life.
In conclusion, I think that experiences of a person have greater influence on people's personality and development.Also we shouldn't forget that all people are in life with their experiences,life experiences.
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also, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64757709251 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58497752941 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.402925007 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.5 106.682146367 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.75 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.5 7.06120827912 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295917587523 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190239237049 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743472456014 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190239237049 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743472456014 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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