As a result, many believe camera surveillance is inadvisable and privacy is one of the most important rights which must be respected in this civilised world.
The use of surveillance cameras to deter criminals is becoming increasingly prevalent in many large cities all over the world. Some people take the position that it intrudes on human privacy. Although I partly agree with this assertion, I believe that the advantages of reinforcing security by means of video cameras outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, the principal reason why many people do not advocate the mass installation of surveillance cameras is that they are not accustomed to being monitored all the time by these devices. For some individuals, this surveillance is redundant and often cause them to be uncomfortable. These people claim that their individual freedom is invaded although they are not suspects. For example, when they are walking down the street, at bus stations or hanging out with their loved ones, the feeling of being observed have an inclination to make them become embarrassed and sometimes irritated. As a result, many believe camera surveillance is inadvisable and privacy is one of the most important rights which must be respected in this civilized world.
On the other hand, I personally believe that surveillance cameras bring more benefits to human life than disadvantages they create. Widespread observation in public areas will make a huge contribution to the reduction of crime rates. When knowing that all their movements are under surveillance, people will not have the intention to engage in unlawful conduct. For instance, drivers will be more likely to conform with traffic rules such as not exceeding the speed limit or not driving through a red light when being conscious of the fact that their traffic offences are being recorded by video cameras. Therefore, the extensive installation of video cameras is crucial, especially in metropolises where there are a large number of inhabitants, workers and tourists.
According to the above analysis, although the utilization of camera systems will certainly in part invade individual freedom, I hold the view that it is still of importance and will only benefit society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ecially in metropolises where there are a large number of inhabitants, workers and tourists. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28700906344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92204213612 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1842015143 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342554009511 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120452048562 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221466289262 0.0667982634062 332% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178529814425 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14212403352 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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