Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The gap between the so called "first world" and the poorer countries is a huge problem and needs to be addressed properly. Many wealthy states or international organizations allocate financial resources trying to solve, or at least to mitigate, this endemic issue. A part of the public opinion believe that those kinds of help are unuseful, describing them as a palliative that not face the roots of the poverty. I slightly agree with this opinion, however, I think that the cash aid is useful in a short-term perspective.
The deep causes of the poverty are very complex and difficult to understand: to summarize, we can say that it is not simply a lack of resources but instead a systemic problem: an unstable political context, a chronic inefficiency of the infrastructures, a low-educated population and so on. For example if the streets, the transportation for the people and the goods, are scarce or, worse, nonexistent, any investor is automatically discouraged to invest in a territory that can not guarantee a profitable income. It is almost naive thinking that a simply "cash injection" is sufficient to change those conditions.
On the other hand, some states, especially the poorest ones, are in such serious situation that many problems must be faced immediately, in short-term vision. Many countries are devastated by the war, or extremely serious diseases, and the citizens are life endangered, an prompty aid is absolutely necessary. For example, during the recent epidemy of Ebola, only the effort of many rich countries was been able to contain the humanitarian emergency and to save lives.
To conclude, I believe that those kinds of help are unuseful, describing them as vinced that the rich countries should invest resources to help the poorest states to be self-sufficient an those goal can be achieved on the long therm with a different range of aids that can not be limited only to the monetary ones, but sometimes the financial intervention is necessary to overcome the most serious crises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, at least, for example, i think, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19637462236 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14134608705 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1858457057 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.363636364 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130414979634 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455505221495 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389794417928 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789756031558 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456843887093 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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