Riding bike will be more and more popular in the future. What do you think about this?
Some people believe that there will be an increasing number of those who ride bicycle in the coming years. Personally, I totally agree with this view.
For variety of reasons, it would be more advantageous of using bicycle than other vehicles about economical and environmentally friendly issues. Firstly, riding is such a magnificent way that traffic attendant can protect environment because it has no engine, which emits smoke to air and raises the rate of carbon dioxide emission higher. Secondly, it is affordable to possess one bicycle and maintain them with low cost. For example, while driving car needs more spacious garage, travelers find easy to get theirs to bicycle parking. They also have to pay lots of money for oil or gasoline if the former is their choice. As a result, the need of consuming fossil fuel has been boomed and it is the precursor of natural resources running-out. Finally, bicycle accident rarely occurs, even if it does, it seems not to be serious than that of car accident or train accident. That means the safety of riding is not worth to make arguments.
In my opinion, movers can use bicycle alternatively to the others for doing exercise and relaxing. It is beneficial for all member of society to keep fit by their own ‘vehicles’ – on feet. It is true that people become more alert and productive as riding. Furthermore, riding helps to burn calories, balance the heart rate and improve the major muscle groups of the legs. Last but not least, they can take riding to go sightseeing with friends or join in riding clubs as a way of psychological treatment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that riding bicycle will become a wider trend in not-too-distant future because of its potential benefits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-11-16 | Sattty | 78 | view |
| 2017-01-24 | justsomeonepassingby | 78 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96271186441 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85657539405 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5918156849 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173483462943 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502441323086 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415969526497 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101605219715 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217357211601 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.