Today, more and more people use smart devices connecting internet to get information. People read news and articles on their smart phones or notebooks instead of buying newspapers everyday. In my opinion, newspapers will be soon replaced by digital information.
Reading on-line or reading things downloaded from internet has many benefits. On the one hand, it’s more environmentally friendly. Without such a large volume of newspapers, there is no need to cut down so many trees to produce papers and no need to waste ink to print. It is not to say that using smart devices costs nothing. But comparing with newspaper, smart devices can reuse again and again. On the other hand, using internet to receive knowledge and information seems to be more likely to get multiple perspectives. For instance, people can read comments or reports with different political stances on webs and social media platforms. Also, they can discuss with other readers or express their own opinions. However, I can quite understand those who support newspapers loyally. I think it was because emotional factors and established habits. Newspapers play an important role for a long time in many people’s life. It’s precious and irreplaceable, like an old friends, or like memories of yesterday. Besides, for some people, especially elders, they read newspaper for a whole life and it’s hard and painful for them to change their reading habits.
In conclusion, although it makes many people reluctant and sad, but I believe that in the near future newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.
- Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion. 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill To what extent do you agree or disagree 72
- With the rise in the popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... notebooks instead of buying newspapers everyday. In my opinion, newspapers will be soon...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any benefits. On the one hand, it's more environmentally friendly. Without s...
^^
Line 3, column 1179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or them to change their reading habits. In conclusion, although it makes many pe...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21789883268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82913897026 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2618143757 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8823529412 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147993910838 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046429179785 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583141431748 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139263606224 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676168101487 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.