With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of
the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At the dawn of this new era, internet is gaining its prevalence in the field innovations. Furthermore, confabulation of getting popular in the area of news by internet could lead to presuppositions like people should cancel mass media and should acquit it as remedy of auld lang syne. I stick the idea that in proximate offing online platform could definitely supersede magazines.
To begin with, it is explicit that requisition for internet is much more conventional compared to newspapers. Incipiently, internet is in a reasonable price in comparison to journals which could be subsidized by eveyone. As individuals are not ought to spring for newspapers which are relatively pricy than that of online platform. Likewise it is much more handy by it’s opportunity to glimpse with the click of the button which are occurring around the humanity. And also utilizing online networks could be salutiferous for environment. As for fabricating millions of magazines for population stipulates to cut a colossal number of trees.
But on the other hand it is detrimental for older denizens who got accustomed to read the bottommost news from magazines. As using web sites from laptops could be much more arduous task for people in twilight years. Additionally dissipating a lot of time near computer for reading news could be detrimental for people in the field of health.
To conclude, internet will replace journals one day for it’s benefits from social financial factors. Furthermore, it could be salutary for environment as Millions of trees would be saved.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
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Message: Did you mean 'by its opportunity'?
Suggestion: by its opportunity
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to reading'.
Suggestion: accustomed to reading
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Suggestion: Additionally,
...uous task for people in twilight years. Additionally dissipating a lot of time near computer...
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Message: Did you mean 'for its benefits'?
Suggestion: for its benefits
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Message: Did you mean 'for its benefits'?
Suggestion: for its benefits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, as for, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22709163347 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04510204524 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9076465273 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066662986135 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262709769638 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290940687943 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434149686501 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256697038195 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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