WRITING TASK 2
Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the context of the current, the utilization of cellphones is quite ubiquitous and this industry is proceeding to enjoy in popularity. As we know, a magnifying number of individuals have a tendency to allocate considerable amount of money and time for recreational purpose of smartphones. As far as I am concerned, the telephone industry can contribute to give assistance to people by educational range and the adverse ramifications also can be observed.
Categorically, the times we are dwelling in is defined as a fastest growing era on account of the massive prevalence of state of the art mobile phones and cutting edge technology. It is widely acknowledged fact that there are abundant opportunities regarding the usage of phones since numerous students are obtaining adequate knowledge by the installations of diverse applications. Reasoning that, the televisions can give sufficient support to enrich scholastic knowledge and broaden horizons as it provides wide range of educational materials. Moreover, this can also create a possibility for the creation of solid relationships and social interaction over remote distances.
Nevertheless, regarding social standpoint, there are people who corroborate that an elevating number of individuals, especially, juveniles are becoming excessively accustomed to the utilization of cellphones. Obviously, dedication of precious time for mobile phones is deemed as a time-consuming as well as energy-dissipating procedure since it entails some distractions and impedes from focusing on documentary works. Hence, the vast majority of people cannot abstain themselves from to suppress the superfluous usage of televisions due to their dependence upon it. In particular, the collapsing on the screens of cellphones can strain the vision of eyes.
Considering both points of views, I accentuate that the precious times of many people are passing by the reliance on technological gadgets including telephones. Therefore, providing that people can maintain the equilibrium in terms of smartphones, they can create opportunity to gain academic knowledge and vital news during their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72327044025 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44854300751 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3998685073 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107235629517 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353601682445 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229776570864 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642211736807 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00754111109894 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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