One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
We have just crossed the threshold of the 21st century and the curtain of the new millennium is slowly rising. In this day and age, constructing bounteous adequate residential areas for the members of society is an issue that numerous people have brought ideas about. The incident is not isolated. It has now drawn an increasing attention to the plight of environmental issues associated with today’s developing world. This essay will display a further deliberation with the prototypes on this outlook and its influence on society.
As we know, the times we are dwelling in is defined as the fastest growing era on account of the urbanization as well as accelerating population. Furthermore, the majority of our quotidian problems is linked with the escalating number of human population. Thereupon, authoritarian state endeavor to establish ample dwelling for the myriad number of people.
Needless to say, constructing more and more houses for people to inhabit may not only pose grave environmental threats to us, but as well it severely undermines the surroundings of rural areas. On the other hand, as a result of overcrowding cities throughout the world today are increasing prone to environmental problems like air, water and noise pollution. At the heart of the matter is that attracting more people to the rural areas can alleviate this problem. Moreover, politicians should provide financial incentives to business and professional workers who willingly relocate to rural areas.
With the above-presented demonstration, I would like to draw my conclusion as follows. I have a propensity to believe that we should firstly conserve our environment pristine and approach to our environment with the sensation of environmentally-friendly attitude. In final analysis, I state that although the issue of housing problems is increasing in general curiosity at a staggering rate and might seen insurmountable, it might be mitigated in the foreseeable future by adequate action from both public and authority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have seen' or 'see'?
Suggestion: have seen; see
...uriosity at a staggering rate and might seen insurmountable, it might be mitigated i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, moreover, so, well, as for, in general, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41904761905 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33442159106 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8815618209 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126056072087 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368034335368 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280259187324 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694465067138 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135685897886 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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