Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In our time and age, problems related to our surroundings is an issue that numerous people have brought ideas about. Furthermore, disputation as to whether deprivation of some kind of beasts and plants is brought massive scathe to environment or there are other environmental issues has been a highly long-running controversy for a certain period of time now. This essay will display a further deliberation with the prototypes on both outlooks and its influence on society.
Regarding the social implications of environmental problems there are those who argue that an escalating number of endangered species pose grave environmental threats on account of ecological changes. Furthermore, given that human overpopulation is lead to the elimination of some species and humans are responsible for destroying the natural habitat of many endangered animals. Because at the present time, more and more individuals prone to chopping trees, breaking food chain and altering the habitat in which animals live.
On the other hand, our Mother Earth is facing more and more environmental concerns except endangered species including air, water and noise pollution. In these days, the exploitation deterioration of our planet is growing at an alarming rate due to our ultramodern technologies. In particular, global warming is becoming a major concern in today’s life and it severely undermines the health our communality. On the other hand, natural disasters like tsunamis, cyclones and volcanic eruptions can cause deleterious impacts as well as influence on loss of life and property.
With the above-presented demonstration, I would like to draw my conclusion as follows. In final analysis, I state that there are more and more environmental concerns in our world. Moreover, I have a propensity to believe that we should firstly conserve our environment pristine and approach to our environment with the sensation of environmentally-friendly attitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...t ideas about. Furthermore, disputation as to whether deprivation of some kind of beasts and ...
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Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... long-running controversy for a certain period of time now. This essay will display a further ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in particular, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54697986577 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39085782074 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0359695436 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295526078124 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900149238318 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055025516798 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160244601933 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197813586066 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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