Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
loss of biodiversity
As we know there are many ways that humans are making use of natural resources in a harmful way which led to the loss of many species which results in bio-diversity. there are many causes for the loss of bio-diversity most of this is claimed to be done by human activities.
change in natural habitat humans have become greedy on land and their resources so they are destroying the forests and animal habitat for construction of roads and dams .pollution is also results in loss of bio-diversity some species have adapted to environment so any change results in their extinction because of chemical substances are being released in the environment.
overexploitation of natural resources in the major reasons, humans activities on some part of forests for resources resulted in the exhaust of natural resources
in order to prevent the loss of further species we need to create awareness among people and warn them about the climatic change which could affect humans and extinct of many species if this continues this way in future years. And we also need to control the use of natural resources and overexploiting the use of it in order to survive on earth otherwise we would also become extinct among the species
taking everything into consideration overall we need to take some serious measures in order to control the loss of biodiversity and look after the species which are being extinct in coming days.so that in future days everyone could know about the all the species that had exixted in our environment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Loss
loss of biodiversity As we know there are m...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a harmful way" with adverb for "harmful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ans are making use of natural resources in a harmful way which led to the loss of many species w...
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Suggestion: There
...species which results in bio-diversity. there are many causes for the loss of bio-div...
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Suggestion: Change
...laimed to be done by human activities. change in natural habitat humans have become g...
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Suggestion: .
...bitat for construction of roads and dams .pollution is also results in loss of bio...
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Suggestion: Overexploitation
...are being released in the environment. overexploitation of natural resources in the major reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96911196911 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80521527136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46332046332 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.774266585 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.4 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969181553145 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564291734946 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177377733079 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570913951806 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220105409562 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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