School should stop using books for teaching instead use Film , T.V and computer. Do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
Technology is gaining prevalence in this jet age of 21st century. At present, a section of society argue that it is necessary for schools to use computer, films and T.V for teaching rather than books. Here, I completely agree with given statements which will be explicated in subsequent paragraphs with my own view.
There are manifold points to endorse my point of view.
First and foremost, using computer by schools for teaching is supposed to be eco-friendly than paper books. To demonstrate, nowadays millions of trees are cutdown to produce paper while schools can use electronic-books in computer which are fruitful for environment and with the help of computer children can easily share e-books by sitting at home. Thus, usage of computer instead of books could be lucrative for environment and student. Besides this, watching educational movies makes study for children easy and interesting, as it provides audio and visual effect where as a reading books is quite boring and lengthy process. Hence, schools should use computer and films for teaching than books.
Further emphasising my point of view, learners becomes tech-savvy if study is done by digital platform, because they came to know about modern technology and stay in touch with it. Therefore, digital platform makes children technical advance. Last but not the least, using technology in the school for teaching helps to enhance accuracy in study. To illustrate, many softwares which identify the mistake are available. Hence, children can reduce their chances of mistake by using computer.
To recapitulate, undeniably there are a few benefits of teaching by books. However, I still believe that using computer, TV and films instead of books can make a study excited, easier and interesting source school should replace books by modern technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75686150805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6599930822 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408878427234 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127549494677 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116247812858 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197872471518 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124874086113 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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