Schools should stop using books for teaching, instead use films, tv and computer. Do you agree or disagree withe the given statement?
Technology has blessed us with great tools in order to live luxurious life. Presently, it is argued that schools should use digital platforms such as films,computer and tv instead of using books for the purpose of teaching. Here ,I fully accord with the given statement.
There are multifarious points to shore up my initial point of view.First and foremast,using digital platforms such as tv, films and computer by schools for teaching is supposed to be eco-friendly as compare to books.To justify, millions of trees are cut down in order to produce paper for books. While schools can use electronic books which are fruitful for environment. In addition ,students can share many kind of information by sitting anywhere at any time. As a result, teaching students by using digital platforms is more lucrative than books. What is more, watching educational movies and films and make study more easy and interesting, as it has both audio and visual. To demonstrate,Students are expected to cover vast amount of syllabus therefore, they have to study for a long time. In fact, by reading books they often get bored and lazy. On The other hand, the attractive color in digital platform make study more interesting. As a result, it is it clear that students should use a computer while studying at schools.
Further in emphasizing my point of you, Learners became tech-savvy if they study through the digital platforms .For example, while studying through computer , they can get the latest information about modern technology as compared to off-line books. In addition, they stay connected with technology if they use e-book. Hence, the e-book will help to make holistic development.
To recapitulate, undeniably, there are a few benefits of teaching by books at schools.however, I believe that modern technology is more lucrative rather than books as they are eco-friendly and more interesting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03712348922 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0296757965 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300962646724 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102159227755 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963959750105 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194527611519 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116445059578 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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