Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree ?
people believe that the state ought to manage scientific researches instead of private businesses. I personally disagree with the statement for the following reasons.
private sectors are able to provide a huge source of fund for the researches. Generally, a scientific research take a long time to accomplish ranging from planing to processing, which always wastes a lot of budget because almost researches may be failed due to some difficulties of money and in-charged people. Thus, there need a constant souce to maintain the whole researches from the commencing to the end. private companies is a good choice for that since they can easily give finance support comparing to that of government which always expand the time resulted from multi-level approval.
Equally importantly, researches is conducted more carefully and responsibly by the private sectors. due to the profit motive, the would strictly control the researches. they can also take it easy to call for the qualified experts with high salary participating in examining the quality of the researches whose results affect directly to their business performance.
By way of conclusion, while there are some ideas that private sectors are not highly recommended to fund and support the contrast opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41708542714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89833459519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8071679984 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169743114625 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636811359685 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331432265441 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095518489322 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391281753948 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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