scientists have been warming for many years about protecting the environment &we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives.despite warning many people do not do this?
Environmental play a vital role in human being life.Infacts, dozens are face problem later to the environmental.However,
all age group force on the lifestyle.they should not be involve environmental protecting.There are plethora reasons behind it.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
gone on the days,todays, technology is very fast and everyone use to the electronical gadgets.For instance, car,truck,train and bus so on . However, there are vehicles causing most of pollution like water,
noise,landand air pollution.Furthermore,
there are very bad facts in citizens life and so, the pollution increasing many diseases like depression, obesity,blood pressures and anxiety etc.
on the flip side,there are no denying the fact that, in my opinion, government would be law new rules regrets to the environment. As well as, government will be start the competition of environment safe to all ages group .For instance, juvenile, adolescent, and primitive .Last but not the least, In my view, government give the prizen what person safe the environment.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon.All said down, some people believe that it is good for the environment that so, government give the money and prizens.Then, government should be help for economices problem in everybody. I think it is good effects for the environment because everyone care and safe the environment.they are not reckless problem and they do not face them.
- The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of DurhamssWrite a report describing the information in the graph below.The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 an 78
- When designing a building the most important feature is intended use of the building rather than its outward apperance ?To what extant do you or disagree? 56
- public cash should be spent on promoting healthy life rather than treating illness.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- some cities do not restrict how styles and unique can be houses and offices that people construct.Do you think the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- obesity was once considered a disease of adults,however,it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think is happening?what can be done to help children stay healthy? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59192825112 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69234753582 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636771300448 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2821099875 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.142857143 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2857142857 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084311866184 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403952377827 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323620801293 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0317701900342 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367131635889 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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