It is widely claimed by many scientists and educationists that every single person from any community or part of region should speak se language . It seems to be interesting and benificial to some extent but its derits can not be ignored . From my perspective it brings positivity as well as negative effects .
To begin with ,if we talk about its advantages which are really worth considering are that , the very first ,as whole world is globalising into a small village , different nations are exchanging goods and services among each other , and to enhance this business this will be utterly advantageous if every person will be speaking same language , it would be quite more easy than today to do deals without any lack of of understanding as well as no any kind of misconception among dealers from any part of the globe.
However , on the flip side of this phenomenon there is need to take into account its efeccts which lead into on the way of negative developement. If this is adopted all over the world there will be a great and unbearable loss to cultures and traditions of many communities. Language of a community is its identity and if someone will lost its identity i dont think there would be any thing else to loss . Even researchers are have showed in a recent research tha every day earth lost 4 languages and people are adopting English or another major language . So in coming generations will be unaware of there cultures, traditions , origins ande there great history which is almost written in only traditional languages.
To conclude, on the one hand this is providing number of benifits to inyernational businesses , whereas on the other side posing a threat to rich heritage of small and large communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, well, whereas, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86440677966 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80712220354 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.514176367 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154441840058 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571936008692 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406793527732 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812310018585 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476939559078 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.