Should child athletes be pushed hard in order to succeed?
Success in life is quite important in life because every person tries to make efforts to achieve accomplishments. In fact, many parents force their child athletes to practice physical sports too much. However; the obligations of parents have a lot of disadvantages in children's life. In my opinion, I do never think that child athletes should be pushed_hard in order to succeed.
The premier facet suffers the influences of pushing hard is in their childhood. First, they lose chances to make friends with other kids. Clearly, they spend the amount of time practicing, therefore; they do not walk around their neighbor to play with the same age kid. Also, children need a firm education establishment rather than success in their age. Of course, knowledge of education will never be redundant in life, it will make more successful than in sport. Finally, children's successes will be the weapon against themselves. To illustrate, when children succeed at a young age they will be pretentious and do not have more motivated for another goal in the future.
Besides the negative effects in children's life, pushing hard also impact on children health in both physical and mental. First of all, children can get serious injuries. For instance, in the process of practicing sport especially football, their legs can be broken. The pain may disappear in several months, but their legs are not as strong as they are before. Also, pushing hard makes children burn out. Apparently, children are prone to hate the sport they used to love because of the horrible pressure their parents and coaches created. Another problem occurs in mental health. Indeed, children will bear the significant stress of overworking, since they do not have enough experience in adapting to this issue in the way adult people do.
In conclusion, success is necessary for human life, but we should not drive children to meaningless success at a quite young age. I strongly believe that pushing hard athlete children in order to succeed never creates any happiness. If you love your children and want them to succeed in life, you should support them to university or other educational establishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1095505618 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71954652077 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558988764045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7393916956 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6818181818 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13636363636 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264408147255 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087389169304 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150253923815 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194281972567 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109675827471 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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