Should children learn a foreign language at young age ?
In my opinion, I strongly believe that children should learn a foreign language at a young age because of the following reasons
Firstly, children's mind are always available to learn many new things.For instance, a recent survey conducted by the institute of science and technology in Hong Kong has proved that children learn everything 10 times faster than adult because of their clear-headed brain
Secondly, children who learn a foreign language can widen their mind.This happen because when they learn a foreign language they will be interested in the people who speak that language.Therefore,they will want to understand its culture,people instead of being afraid because they are strange.
In conclusion, children should learn a foreign language at a young age because it contributes to the children's development and because of the flexibility of the children's brain,I think children should learn a foreign language at a young age
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but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40816326531 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20034590199 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.0 49.4020404114 468% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.5 106.682146367 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.5 7.06120827912 743% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.608790369067 0.244688304435 249% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.602768795048 0.084324248473 715% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19426383747 0.0667982634062 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.429856025232 0.151304729494 284% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.280271516409 0.056905535591 493% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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