should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government or should be the responsibility of the individuals to pay for the services. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Government funding has been a subject that attracts great attention. Some people argue that education and healthcare fee should be spent by state budget while others think individual citizen have to pay for their own services. This essay aims to elaborate on both views in detail.
To begin with, people have their own reasons when emphasizing that education and healthcare should be free of charge. The state budget mainly comes from tax payment and it should contribute to education and healthcare purposes for the sake of tax-payers. Secondly, it is admitted that health and education are the backbones of any civil society because an adequate education would help to promote productivity of the workforce and thrive economic prosperity of the country on a global scale. In addition to this, the quality of healthcare services encourages individual's loyalty to their country rather than immigrating into another country with a better welfare system.
On the other hand, instead of public institutions, some citizens tend to choose and pay for services with higher quality as their preference. There are several evidence supporting this view like people prefer flexible appointments and home care in a private hospital and children desire to learn in an international school within state-of-the-art technology facilities. Therefore, they have to afford all these services without any financial aid from the government. In the medical ground, individuals should be accountable for any treatment related to their unhealthy lifestyle including smoking or drinking. If the government cover all the expense, it will indirectly promote these irresponsible practices and hinder social growth.
In conclusion, as far as I concerned, the government had better be responsible for education and healthcare activities, while individuals have to be financially prepared for a better standard of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some evidence'.
Suggestion: some evidence
... quality as their preference. There are several evidence supporting this view like people prefer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56206896552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00251381005 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.982355215 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344619004062 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111449532315 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933092203337 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227762940625 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746414193595 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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