In present scenario, with changing time gap between Youngblood and senior citizens are increasing. A school of thought opine that adolescents should obey gray people's regulations whereas others reckon that it is internal change for juveniles to oppose their grandparents. This essay will tend to shed light on both perspectives that will describe in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, adolescent period is full of stress and strain as well as teenagers have no experience of life that their grandparents have. With the help of some specific rules and regulations senior masses can connect their grandchildren with customs and traditions that may inculcate moral values among them. For instance, some orthodox people setup rule on all family members to eat food together that increase their love and make bonding strong.
On the flip side, strict rules of senior masses are not accepted by youngbloodds, because some times grandparents prohibited their grandchildren for spending time with their friends late night. Nowdays adolescents wants independency as they do not like to confined at home under some restrictions. Moreover, orthodox thinking try to make girls to stay at home in four walls, not going to study, so than juveniles raise their voice against such kind of activities and want to live their life with full freedom by wearing dresses according to their choice, watching TV programms and choose subjects as their interest not according to gender demand.
In conclusion, adolescents should get advice from their grandparents for important decisions of life and try to change orthodox thinking according to modern world.
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- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40856031128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80864861055 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4265799244 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581777931936 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272428165022 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340350370693 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433533027033 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252929667062 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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