Smacking children is the best from of discipline.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days parents are using harsh methods to organize their child's life even it makes their life difficult. Some people even believe that physical punishment like smacking them is the best way to develop their children. This essay will argue why smacking children is not at all the right way to improve the behaviour their children.
Many parents who always want their child to stand out in society as a great individual, feel they should train them to reach such extent even beating them is the only way to do so. Such that, they tend to raise them in a strict environment. For instance these people want their children to perform well in their exams to obtain good grades, so they give physical punishment to install fear in them. Because of these reasons, they usually punish their children and think they are being caution about their son or daughter's future and believe that they are making the wise choice by doing this.
Despite these minor reasons putting a child in harsh environment make them feel suffocate and damage them mentally. Many children suffer perment taurma because of these incidents. Some Children even run away from their home and become homeless because they are not able to tolerate anymore. Overall the idea of smacking the children is unneccesary and dangerous and could lead to the worst outcome from the child and leads to rash behaviour or some children even can not socially interact with anyone they always feel they are alone.
This essay argued why parents should not treat their children in an ill-mannered way. They should be treated under proper guidence and should always be caring towards so that they will show the love to the upcoming generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
These days parents are using harsh methods to organize the...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an ill-mannered way" with adverb for "ill-mannered"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...parents should not treat their children in an ill-mannered way. They should be treated under proper g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23895339978 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5332511071 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128950981527 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055355912825 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478415633056 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835111085734 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413461081967 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.