Nowadays people are suffering from many fatal diseases with their choice of life style which cause serious problem in their health. Treatment of the cause of disease result in wastage of saving ,times and family disputes. Today majority of population of world are conscious about health and effect of smoking over it but the choice made freely made them causing health problem and pay hard for medical treatment as comparison of non smoker. I strongly believe degradation on health by smoking has played major role in today’s society.
Smoking includes marijuana, weeds, cigarette and many more it is available in different taste and flavor in market. It is famous in celebration in many cultures. Many of the people used it as a regular meals some as interest and other as addiction. Advertising smoking is also common and most used it as showing as higher profile. Though Everyone knows that’s it have effect on health and smoking companies in Nepal have written smoking is injurious to health and it cause cancer with a posture on its packet but we can still find extra legends smoking heading with risk.
Smoking contain a substance named nicotine which is harmful for health. It can be addicting in nature and way abstinence is bit difficult. Nicotine is inhale from a pipe of cigarette which constrict the blood vessel resulting improper blood circulation in body, which can result of myocardial ischemia, coronary artery disease and cardiovascular diseases. In gestrointestional system it sign as acidity and forms ulcer in gestrointestional tract. The main portion where it affect is respiratory system. Today the foremost cause of cancer which is still behind in progress of complete care that is caused by smoking. Lungs cancer is increasing by active smoking that’s binds the lungs alveoli deplict in gas exchange and releasing harmful chemical substance. Many people today are dying due to lack of treatment caused by smoking while rest of the people with higher classes are suffer and their cost of treatment is bigger as comparison to other due to lots of medical test to do. Regular physiotherapy, diet, and life style is suggested for them.
In conclusion, smoking is directly affecting the people’s health although of their self aware about it. A lot of health related problem is consequences of its people are being predators every year. So better judgement is required because prevention is better than cure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e of disease result in wastage of saving ,times and family disputes. Today majorit...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...Many of the people used it as a regular meals some as interest and other as addiction...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...e. Though Everyone knows that's it have effect on health and smoking companies ...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...n smoking is injurious to health and it cause cancer with a posture on its packet but...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'contains'.
Suggestion: contains
...s smoking heading with risk. Smoking contain a substance named nicotine which is har...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...dicting in nature and way abstinence is bit difficult. Nicotine is inhale from a pi...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'inhaled'.
Suggestion: inhaled
...bstinence is bit difficult. Nicotine is inhale from a pipe of cigarette which constric...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'signs'?
Suggestion: signs
...iseases. In gestrointestional system it sign as acidity and forms ulcer in gestroint...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...tional tract. The main portion where it affect is respiratory system. Today the foremo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive smoking that's binds the lungs alveoli deplict in gas exchange and rele...
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Line 5, column 885, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...t of the people with higher classes are suffer and their cost of treatment is bigger a...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...r and their cost of treatment is bigger as comparison to other due to lots of medi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78398625287 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538847117794 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4470611487 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19047619048 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230192347154 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559715201475 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655493584435 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138031971616 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743142687811 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.